Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The debate on whether or not today’s generation are living life with much ease than their grandparents holds a wide range of view. Some argue that with the advance in technology, we are now living in a much easier and happier ambiance, as compared with our ancestors. Per contra, others claim that the hectic, busy schedule of twenty-first century is making present generations life harder. In my personal opinion, I agree with the stance that today’s living condition are more comfortable and easier than our previous generation. I feel this way for several reasons among which two will be developed in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, advancement in modern technology has made our life substantially easier and this facilities were not available to our grandparents. The modern world has better facilities in each and every sector, may it be health, communication, education, transportation, entertainment and many more. We now can perform the same task more easily, rapidly and effectively, as compared to our ancestors. I have to admit that my opinion in this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, my grandparents frequently share their experiences and life knowledge to me and my sister. They talk about the technologies and facilities of their time and I have to admit that our present generation cannot even imagine the paradigm shift we have been through. For instance, this morning while having breakfast, my little sister was quarrelling with my mother over the fact that her bus station has been moved few meters ahead and now she does not feel like going to the same school. After hearing this, my grandfather started to share his experience of going to school. As stated by him, the facility of school bus services was not available at their time and as a result, they had to walk at least one hour just to attend their schools. This is a just one instance of the technological shifts that has been made our life much easier and comfortable. For this reason, we are living a more comfortably than our grandparents.
Secondly, searching for work and job opportunity is also very easier in our generation. To be more specific, today’s generation have better technical expertise, higher quality education and easier access to job opportunity which has reduced a considerable load of finding and securing work. On the other hand, our grandparents didn’t enjoy the same benefits despite of the repertoire they possessed. Drawing from my own personal experience, my own grandfather used to tell us stories of travelling far distance searching for work and even when he was able to find one, still because of no work stability, he had to repeat the same process frequently. My own grandfather has experience of almost about 10 jobs, all of them in distant places. However, we do not face similar problems. I was able to secure a stable job along with health benefits and providential funds, just by uploading my resume into an online portal. It’s certainly clear to see why we are living a comparatively easier and comfortable lifestyle than our grandparents.
In the light of above mentioned reasons, I strongly belief that today’s generation are living life with more ease and comfort because of advancement in technology and easier job finding opportunities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The debate on whether or not today's generation are living life...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
... twenty-first century is making present generations life harder. In my personal opinion, I ...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... present generations life harder. In my personal opinion, I agree with the stance that today&apo...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... made our life substantially easier and this facilities were not available to our gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, at least, for instance, i feel, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2820.0 1977.66487455 143% => OK
No of words: 549.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13661202186 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00341708703 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513661202186 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 881.1 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6028805731 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.96 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163690730515 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512932969229 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479180798655 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119210663957 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205022684071 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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