The world around us is dynamic. It is changing at an unmachable pace. What it was yesterday maynot be present today. Lots of generations has passed with this dynamicism. People behaviors and cultural beliefs are changing rapidly with time. Humans, who were cave dwellers, are conquerers of world now. Thus, it is clear that with advancement of time our life has been easier as well. I firmly believe that the statement presented above is true because of several reasons.
First, with advancement in science and technology, every day life is becoming smoother and easy. People used to hunt animals with spears in jungle for food, now they have faciltiy to shoot with guns without keeing themself at risk. I remember one time when my grandparents use to rhetor their childhoot stories. According to them, there were very few number of schools when they were child. They had to walk miles before reaching their destination. There was no facility of transportation to aid them. Had the time been now, they would atleast have got facility of vehicle. This simply explains how miserably my grandparents spent their life. On the contrary, my campus is also miles away from my home but I entertain to go on bike. Thus, it proves that my grandparents lived with difficulties than I am now.
Second, looking at past few decades infrastructural development has rocketed at higher pace. This was not always the case in my country. These facilities were enjoyed by minority of population when my grandparents were at their youth. The facility that I am enjoying is million folds better than that enojoyed by my grandparents at my age. My grandparents told me they first stepped into the bus when tehy were at 30s. Before that they never saw what transportation was. And if I try to remember, I rode bus even before I could speak my infant tones. I got my own mobile sets when I touched 14 years. But, my grand parents touched mobiles and communications devices only during their 40s. Thus, I feel like I am having easier life than them because of facilities that I am enjoying at my young age which my parents couldnot even dream of.
Finally, with development of philosophy and technology, social and cultural norms are being modified as well. The society I live today is far less conservative than societies of past. We have law against cast discrimination and other conservative beliefs. But, my grandparents grew under the canopy of conservative thoughts. These conservative societal beliefs restricted freedoms of my parents. Past societies had belief of witchdoctors which would put life of people at risk. There were societal discriminations, racism, poverty and number of social problems clouding each individual's freedom. This made their life miserable. But, the situation at present is changed. We are enjoying freedoms as we are under the surviliance of laws and human rights.
Therefore, I firmly believe that life at present is smoother and easier that past. Science and technology has made the world narrower and easier to live. People are insightful and can make rational decisions themselves. We are no longer being governed by radical cultural superstitions. We can enjoy our freedom. Unfortunaletly, our grand parents couldnot enjoy these things during their youth. So, they were compelled to live miserably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...cement of time our life has been easier as well I firmly believe that the statemen...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...ories According to them there were very few number of schools when they were child They ha...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...outh The facility that I am enjoying is million folds better than that enojoyed by my g...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ch my parents couldnot even dream of Finally with development of philosophy and tech...
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Line 7, column 490, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'discriminations'' or 'discrimination's'?
Suggestion: discriminations'; discrimination's
...e of people at risk There were societal discriminations racism poverty and number of social pro...
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Line 7, column 565, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...number of social problems clouding each individuals freedom This made their life miserable ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...surviliance of laws and human rights Therefore I firmly believe that life at present i...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y were compelled to live miserably
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, i feel, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 15.1003584229 225% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2721.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 549.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95628415301 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80224821309 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482695810565 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 854.1 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 549.0 20.1344086022 2727% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2721.0 100.406767564 2710% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 549.0 20.6045352989 2664% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 100.0 5.45110844103 1834% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148037117363 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148037117363 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862410930949 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241213749845 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 276.4 11.7677419355 2349% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -485.76 58.1214874552 -836% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 217.4 10.1575268817 2140% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.97 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 33.97 8.01818996416 424% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 10.002688172 570% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 221.6 10.0537634409 2204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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