Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are Today?
Use specific reason and examples to support your answers?
In the modern era of technology cars are so important in our daily life. Certainly, some people would agree with the statement that the number of cars will decrease in twenty years’ time, while others would argue that it depends on a great deal of factors. As far as I am concerned, I hold a firm position that the number of cars will increase in twenty years because rapid growth of car technology and benefits of owning a car. Of two reasons which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is important to consider buying a car with advanced features in the fast-moving world. Due to Urbanization and rapid growth in technology, car has become a necessity in day -to- day life. I must admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience.
There was a time when a family had only one car and everyone would share that whether it had advance technology or not. The family is used that car for their daily use. However, when the new generation people they need more advanced car when they move from urban area to city life. You see, this reminds me of the time when I had a conversation with my friend about buying a new Honda car with eye site technology. As a result, he brought a Honda car with all latest technology within seven days. For this reason I think that due to rapid growth in technology in fields of car manufacturing companies everyone should change the mind to buy new cars when compared to the cost of repair the old car.
Secondly, considering the importance of long list of benefits of owning a car. Drawing from my own experience when I was working in city, I used to take metro and bus to reach my office. Before buying a car I always had problem catching the metro while returning to home due to my workload. But now I decided to buy a car and I approached different car dealers they offer me an attractive finance option. Moreover, they offer me a small amount of cash back on top of that they provide me with zero percent interest. This approach changed my opinion from buying an old car to brand new car and finally I brought one. But now my life is easier. I start my journey late and leave the office on my own time. Accordingly, I agree this experience taught me that owning a car can even make our job easier. It is certainly clear to see why there would be more cars in twenty years than today.
In the light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that in twenty years there will be more cars in use than there are today. In most cases in twenty years of time there will be almost three cars per family, not only will make the people’s lives easier but also make the environment more polluted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... take metro and bus to reach my office. Before buying a car I always had problem catch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, i think, as a result, in most cases, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48296593186 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52531251619 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480961923848 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6844143536 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.48 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.96 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233402393143 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751328204672 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660168428403 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146889205825 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543966200465 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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