Many colleges give students the flexibility to choose to live in dorms on campus or in
apartments nearby communities. Would you prefer to live on campus or off campus and why?
Use specific detail and examples to support your opinion.
Colleges nowadays, have many facilities to live on campus or off campus which are pretty much expensive. I would prefer to live off campus in the apartment rather than on campus. I like this way due to three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, on campus facilities are much more expensive. On the contrary, apartment will be much cheap. My own experience has been a compelling example of this. I was studying in University of Ottawa taking Health care Administration as my post-graduation. One of my friend, staying in dorms at university has to pay 25,000$ for whole year which was very expensive. On the other hand, I had to pay only 10,000$ for my apartment rent and if I add 3000$ more I can pay off my food as well which I felt was very cheap. In this way, living in appartment would save the money.
Furthermore, living in apartment helps us to make new friends. We can have more social network in the community and people can know us or sometimes we can know the people more precisely. For instance, when I was living with my friends in an apartment while studying in University of New York, I had made friends with my roommate’s friend which was great and I got the chance to know the people in New York. Moreover, I got the social friend circle with my common friends which was fun and enjoyable.
Lastly, living off campus can make the student a responsible person. Students can know the really value of money and their future. They can feel how long they need to go in their future life studying a particular program and making their career. Take my own example for it. When I left from home and started university, I was very irresponsible person, does not care much about the people staying around me and telling anything to anyone. But as the days passed by living in thee university, I came to know the meaning of responsibility, making all the things by my own, be nice to everyone as well as helping friends. In this manner, living in apartment can help us to know the value of a person.
In conclusion, living off campus is not only cheaper but also beneficial to make new friends a d increase social network while help the student to become responsible and a valuable person in their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, really, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58374384236 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66580873161 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467980295567 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8068767572 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5909090909 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186069361641 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758574587748 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109322701075 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143561939855 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113714254598 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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