Due to the intricate, developed, and competitive world, we all need more experiences than before, and I am guessing that personal experiences are handier than experiences in books. I have several reasons why I feel this which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, personal experiences cherish in our minds forever, and we do not forget them while others' experiences may disappear from our minds by passing time. For the sake of they are not tangible in our life. My personal experiences are one compelling example of this. When I was children, I had a book that studied it at night. It was about one mouse that did not listen to her parents' guidance, and she left their home and was lost. I always studied this book, but I had never thought about its repercussions. one day, I wanted to come back home after school. I did not listen to my parents' advice, and I came back alone; I was lost. This situation was panicky for me; while I was crying, one of my mother's friends found me, and I was lucky, thanks to a compassionate friend. After that, I learned that I should listen to my parents' leadings. while before this event, I had just studied that book, but I did not get experience.
Secondly, every experience happens in exclusive situations, so one's experiences may not keep up with other's situations; in addition, every person has a special personality, so the reaction of each person to some occurrence may be different from others. Consider an exciting situation like jumping from the mountains; it is so exciting and enjoyable for someone and horrible for another. Actually, they have one experience, but their reactions are dissimilar. Another example is including two different experiences; the sunny day may have different meanings. In the Sahara region, a sunny day means a routine day, but in England sunny day is a time for sunbathing. So people in different places can not have phenomena and experiences as the same exactlly.
In a nutshell, I entirely agree with this statement that experiences in books can not convey knowledge about what occurs. To gain knowledge we need our own experiences which can fix in our minds forever, plus the experiences taking place in different situations by persons are not similar together so everyone should experience by him or herself. Therefore, there is no alternative for our own experiences; we can just study books' experiences and save them in our minds to simulate them in similar situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i feel, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85985748219 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84865150919 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50593824228 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6733538374 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1363636364 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195139462604 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512880263538 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058505536381 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124604147089 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463395835092 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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