Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the most important problems we face today can be solved in our lifetime?
During our whole life, we have to face all kinds of difficulties and problems. However, in my opinion, people cannot solve the most important problems in several areas that we confront in our lifetime.
First of all, speaking of environment, there are still lots of severe problems remaining. As we know, people have spent decades exploring clear energy resources. Although people have found a few clear energy resources such as solar energy, tide energy and nuclear energy and so forth, actually people cannot put these energy resources put into use very well. For example, a nuclear power plant in Japan exploded in 2011 and an amount of radiations released into oceans, which caused huge environmental pollution even influenced nearby countries like Korea and China. Until now, 8 years have been passed, there are still amounts of radiations existed in the environment, though plenty of people have tried their best to reduce the pollution. According to the reports, the radiations cannot be cleared up in hundreds of years. Thus, some of important environmental issues will exist longer than people’s lifetime.
Besides, in term of medicine, doctors are not able to deal with some questions even in their whole life. For one thing, there are some existing serious diseases that cannot be healed around the world such as cancer and AIDS. For another, there always are new viruses and disease coming about in a period of time. Even though doctors make great efforts and they are capable of curing all these sicknesses in one day, people cannot avoid death. As time goes by, people will get older and their physical conditions become much worse than before, then they will die without pain. This is why people are not able to resolve the most vital issues during their lifetime.
As the two reasons mentioned above, it is easy to reach the conclusion that the most important questions that people confront with will not be fixed throughout their life. Nonetheless, due to these problems, people will be motivated to make progress in the future and then everybody can live a better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 245, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
... as cancer and AIDS. For another, there always are new viruses and disease coming about in...
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Line 9, column 298, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...w viruses and disease coming about in a period of time. Even though doctors make great efforts...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, speaking of, such as, first of all, for one thing, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05747126437 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45768119487 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2217398215 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.529411765 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124936490317 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465891195002 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580872953679 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109295358049 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865828564674 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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