Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One can learn a lot about a person from the type of friends this person has.
here are various ways for us to learn about an individual, including appearance and behaviors. Some believe that one of the most efficient way is to take a look at the friends he has, which I firmly agree with. I am in favor of this opinion that we can learn a lot of information about a person from the friends he has because friends usually share some common traits and influence each other as time goes by,
Firstly, one can learn that person's characteristics and interests from his or her friends. As is known to us, one's words and behaviors are the expression of ones' sole and inner heart, thus the traits rooted deep in our mind will influence the process of choosing a friend. If two people share some common traits, including characteristics, interests and pursuits, they are more likely to be friends, even sole mates since it is easy for them to confront our inner satisfaction or offer guidance and assistance for each other when they are trapped in hardships. On the contrary, if those two people share nothing in common, even many of their ideas appear to be in conflict with each other, those two people will not become intimate friends. Through observing that person's friends interactions and communication, people around them will have a general judgement upon their characters and interests. Thus, it is reasonable for us to learn about a people from the person's friends.
Secondly, one can learn that person from his or her friends because friends will influence each other's attitude and demeanor as time goes by. Friends, to some extent, implement and complement our life. There's no such a person regarded themselves as perfect, thus, each people are ready to get help and assistance from the people around them, especially friends. When our friends are in face of difficulties, we will help them get out of plight by offering practical advice. When friends are exchanging ideas towards an issue, we will express ours own opinions. During intimate interactions and communication, our friends will be greatly influenced by our distinctive ideas and demeanor. Take Mark Elliot Zuckerberg and Sheryl Sandberg, CEO and COO of the most popular social website, who share the most valuable friendship described by media. Facebook, for example. During the process of striving for the achievement, both of them are greatly influenced by each other's attitude and habits. Like Zuckerberg, Sandberg holds the same opinion towards the UI of Facebook, which is simple but convenience. Like Sandberg, Zuckerberg are in favor of holding stuff meetings before critical corporation decisions. Therefore, it will be possible for people to make a general judgement upon their friends’ attitude and demeanor.
To cap, it is reasonable to learn a lot about a person from the type of friends this person has.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e ready to get help and assistance from the people around them, especially friends. When our friends a...
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... of them are greatly influenced by each others attitude and habits. Like Zuckerberg, S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, even so, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2364.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06209850107 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77374755841 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47965738758 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7334301084 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2380952381 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275867814414 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931359644899 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137461186298 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281804085312 0.150856017488 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171203327739 0.0645574589148 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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