Our global diaspora is broadly segregated into halve the occidental and oriental. There are bound to be differences in social, economical and cultural front as well. The issue of whether successful leader must have the ability to make decisions quickly is no exception and irrefutable. Ultimate, I opine that a successful leader should be able to make quick decisions. I will explain why with pertinent argument and examples. There are myriad of argument in favor of my stance the most conspicuous one is that a good leader only make quick decision for the safety of is people especially if it has to do with the well being of is subject. Although, all decision are not expected to be quick and immediate but if there is need for it, it should be done quickly. Because that is what a successful leader is train and elected for.
Another, pivotal aspect of my stance is that we live in a wicked world full of terrorist and criminals, if a child is kidnap do we have to wait for commissioner of police, to have a board meeting before seeking ways to send officers to the field? No, the reason for been selected as a leader is the ability to make quick and good decision without the presence of team members and without putting others at risk.
Underpinning the aforementioned, an empirical aspect of my argument is that there are also disadvantages that quick decision can also result in negative effect to the general public.
Although the situation seems dire, there are several steps that we can take to make real tangibles changes. Firstly, All leaders should be educationally train in preparation of making a quick decision that will not affect the general public. Secondly, federal and state government should implement a law that will guild all leaders before making decision and should also be train physically and emotionally in relation to their job.
To conclude, I would say everything has it own pron and cons. But we must be vigilant enough to eliminate the cons and this is only possible if we have the right perception and perspective towards the issues of a successful leader having the ability to make decisions quickly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'kidnaped', 'kidnapped'.
Suggestion: kidnaped; kidnapped
... terrorist and criminals, if a child is kidnap do we have to wait for commissioner of ...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...n also result in negative effect to the general public. Although the situation seems dire, ...
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Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...quick decision that will not affect the general public. Secondly, federal and state government...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
...conclude, I would say everything has it own pron and cons. But we must be vigilant ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81793478261 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72254809611 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502717391304 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4755398778 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8125 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317079533679 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109975502159 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827353976733 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163838212363 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952739434163 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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