Do you think English will remain a global language despite globalization? Discuss you views with examples.

Our global diaspora is broadly segregated into two halves oriental and occidental. Therefore, there are bound to be differences on social economical and communicational front as well. The issue of English remaining a global language despite globalization is no exception and irrefutable. It has it advantages and disadvantages. This essay is going to discuss both aspect and come to a reasonable conclusion.
English as a means of communication and has offer the world opportunity to trade from one country to another. In addition, without the use of English there would be no trade globally. English has dominated so many other languages and is difficulty to say that it will not remain globally. Not to mention, globalization, globalization has no effect on English language.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is the implementation of speaking and writing English before immigrating to other western countries. This implementation is eradicating other languages and increasing the need to constantly use English all over the world. Research has should that many businesses, schools and companies now communicate in English despite, globalization.
Although, some people claim that English will not remain a global language due to globalization. They believed that business that are moving to new countries move in with their culture and languages. But I opine that English will remain a global language because without English there is no trade and there is no education in todays western global world.
To conclude I would like to say that although, English will remain a global language despite globalization, but we should be prudent to strike a balance, logical and rational approach towards the same optimal and fruitful effort or utilization of resources.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'offered'.
Suggestion: offered
...ish as a means of communication and has offer the world opportunity to trade from one...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cate in English despite, globalization. Although, some people claim that English will no...
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Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... there is no education in todays western global world. To conclude I would like ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42753623188 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18974774131 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1979013998 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 7.25397266985 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331219575127 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111613415519 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10896183605 0.071462118173 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195930467692 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787065653209 0.0609392437508 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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