The argument over whether study is important to achieved success or there is no relationship between study and success in not yet settle. Although, many people are claiming that study in not important to achieved success. Whereas, study offers better good job opportunity, career advancement, good quality lifestyle and better decision making. Ultimately, I think that study is important to achieved success. I will explain why in this essay with pertinent argument and examples.
There are myriad of argument in favor of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that it offers good paying jobs such as chief executive officer. Another, pivotal aspect of my stance is that it offers quality friends and good social life. For instance can a man become chief executive officers without having circular education? No.
On the other hand, not studying will prevent you from unnecessary study at night, not stressing about school fees and studying under pressure. Knowing that pressure can cause emotional, physical and mental imbalance in student.
In view of the aforementioned argument outlined above good education can lead to success. Parent should do there best to send their children to school because the success associated with study cannot be ignored. Nevertheless, the impact of study load that can lead to poor quality of life should not be overlooked as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...en study and success in not yet settle. Although, many people are claiming that study in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...good paying jobs such as chief executive officer. Another, pivotal aspect of my s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, for instance, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25114155251 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67069034025 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611872146119 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7093196301 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1428571429 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290647011185 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107293945683 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129035535888 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158677010498 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120321089701 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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