Dear Mary,
I am writing to inform you that I will be travelling to Bendigo on the 29/12/2016 for my student placement in Bendigo health care services. As a result I will be needing three weeks annual leave to enable me travel to Bendigo, because I am expected to be at the facility on the 28/12/2016 for general work place orientation and fire training within the facility.
considering, the urgency of my travelling is it possible for one of the newly employed causal staff to take over my shift pending my arrival from Bendigo? I will be spending three weeks in Bendigo and I will appreciate leave approval before 28/12/2016 to enable me make traveling arrangement and do so travelling shopping before I leave.
I am open to any sugestion you may have regarding my leave request and approval. I will be most grateful if my request is given due consideration by you.
Kind regards
John Peters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ealth care services. As a result I will be needing three weeks annual leave to enable me t...
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Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Considering
...nd fire training within the facility. considering, the urgency of my travelling is it pos...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...egarding my leave request and approval. I will be most grateful if my request is ...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... due consideration by you. Kind regards John Peters.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75796178344 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80363325823 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630573248408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9620423153 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809565702096 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442222074272 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318253936548 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065085620303 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318268956175 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.