Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed in doing a new job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment is more important than the excellent knowledge of this job.
Since the dawn of civilization, human beings have been putting their efforts and bend over backward so as to find a decent and well-paid job to successfully face trials and tribulations in their lives. Various point of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question so as to whether to adopt to working environment is much more useful than having a knowledge of the job. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that people should be knowledgeable and experienced in order to do a job completely and precisely. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, no matter adapt to the environment or being knowledgeable, people should try to enjoy their jobs and stay focus on what they are doing. Broadly speaking, although adopt to the area of working help people to do their careers meticulously, without knowledge and experience hardly can people gain success in their job. As a palpable example, students should have knowledge in order to be able to keep on their study and reach a higher education in their personal lives. Arguably, successful people have always had the plan for their future and they never do something without any knowledge or a plan. So, despite adapting to the new environment, people should put their knowledge and experiences into practice to gain a conspicuous and long-lasting success.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance is that having excellent knowledge of the job will provide an opportunity for individuals to do their jobs punctiliously. If we take a minute to ponder over it, vast majorities of people adapt themselves to the new environment but they are not skilled and knowledgeable enough to succeed in their position. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that knowledge not only can guarantee people's success and fortune but also knowledge can patronize people to reach the pinnacle of their careers.
However, every coin has two sides. Having knowledge might not always work due to the fact that people spend most of their precious time in their works. So, they have to adapt themselves to the new environment in order to stay happy and lively. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, well, as to, broadly speaking
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95476190476 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8501213325 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6690189462 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.411764706 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7058823529 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230007535698 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806120573489 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586231187728 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122970605406 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682165226724 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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