There has long been a discussion about whether students should pay more attention to their physical ability. And a multiple of parents contends that students need to focus on their study and doing physical exercise would only do harm to their academic performance. Personally speaking, I supports the opposite, which is why I agree that passing a physical exam is required before graduating.
Firstly, the exam enforces students to exercise on a regular basis which can be particularly beneficial for their health. Take myself as an example, when I was in my senior high, I usually escape from my P.E. class and find myself somewhere to do homework. Consequently, I felt exhausted from time to time and could easily be sick. After some time, I grew a hobby to play badminton, and ever since then, I began to be more energized. If the exam exists, I would have practiced a lot and built a strong figure which could keeps me from illnesses I suffered later in life.
In addition, doing sports wouldn't be considered as a foe of study, and students can be more released from the stress. Nowadays, due to the increasing competitive pressure, hardly could students be fully involved and enjoy themselves in any sports entertainment. The exam gives meaning to doing these relaxing sports activities, and I'm sure students would be relieved to find that they got something interesting to participate in after days of hard work.
Finally, the future demands talents with comprehensive abilities. Students should never be satisfied with managing to only achieve something in study. When they grow to manhood, they would come to realize that the world is so much more than what they can learn merely in classroom. When the exam presses them to work out their bodies, they will eventually grow to enjoy the benefits brought by it. Teaming up with peers in the soccer fields, competing over each other in a marathon and more, these will certainly enhance their interpersonal interaction ability, not to mention building close relationships with more people.
Based on the factors I explored above, I strongly hold the belief that students should be required to pass a physical exam before graduating. The exam contributes to their health, deal with mental stress and most importantly, drives them to be individuals of comprehensive ablilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'support'
Suggestion: support
...mic performance. Personally speaking, I supports the opposite, which is why I agree that...
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Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that passing a physical exam is required before graduating. Firstly, the exam...
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Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al exam is required before graduating. Firstly, the exam enforces students to e...
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Line 2, column 458, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had practiced'?
Suggestion: had practiced
...e more energized. If the exam exists, I would have practiced a lot and built a strong figure which c...
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Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'keep'
Suggestion: keep
...t and built a strong figure which could keeps me from illnesses I suffered later in l...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...er in life. In addition, doing sports wouldnt be considered as a foe of study, and st...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ly involved and enjoy themselves in any sports entertainment. The exam gives meaning t...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...g these relaxing sports activities, and Im sure students would be relieved to find...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04663212435 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80716188642 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577720207254 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3345320575 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0615795786115 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021176144111 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0197570615707 0.0737576698707 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0365251663267 0.150856017488 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139338607727 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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