Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow children to make
their own choices rather than determine their children’s future for them. Use specific reasons to
support your answer.
Agree:
- Responsible
- Self-confident
- Find abilities
Children should have permission to decide for their future without his/her parents impression and their idea or what they want for their childeren. I agree with that idea because of many reasons but the bold one in my mind is to find his/her ability in every sides of life.
Fisrt of all, its people right to decide for their future whenever they want, because we come to this world just once and live once session. Parents should not think like that because they born a kid, they have this right to decide for them. I know so many parents that make force on his children for whatever that been their ambition in their youth, and because they could not achieve them do some acts like this. But in my opinion it is a real exceed to children. so many ones do whatever their parents want and now they think that it is not a future, carrier, life they want. Consequently, they are not be happy.
Secondly, childern should do whatever they want, indeed, when they do mistake and think about it, for the next session they try to change his mind and decision to come closer to his/her aim. Every session that children do a mistake it is a new chance to find his/her abilities. Nothing in life is not important than finding your abilities, because after that you know what major and job you have to chose for your future. Furthermore, it is parents duty to help their children and be aware of their abilities to lead them to that point.
In conclusion, everyone have that right to decide for his life and future without his parents wished. Parents have to be with their children to find their abilities. Just in that situation they will be happy now and future, and they not to be regret for what they chose cause of his parents required.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...should not think like that because they born a kid, they have this right to decide f...
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Line 2, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...pinion it is a real exceed to children. so many ones do whatever their parents wan...
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Line 2, column 606, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...e they want. Consequently, they are not be happy. Secondly, childern should do w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17048931681 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443037974684 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7934604135 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262539699403 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11562093175 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791965013681 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196439663248 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379780179375 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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