Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, parents play a vital role in their children's future. parents help their children in different level of life such as doing schoolwork, finding a job, and marriage, to name but a few. In this regard, there is a long-standing discussion among parents whether juvenile are able to get around their problem by their own or not. some parents believe that young people should be dependent on them completely. Others, however, advocate the idea that these days, juvenile do not need parent's assist for some reasons. I personally, concur with the latter. In the following paragraphs, I will delve in to the most important reasons.
To begin with, young people are sophisticated and well-educated people, so they can make the best decision on their own. In today's society, education is one of the most essential requisites, so almost every young people have followed university education. therefore, they are well-educated and intellectual people. they consider all aspects of their decision and attempt to choose the best way. As opposed to the past that juvenile did not have sufficient knowledge and experience to be confident about their determinations, so they depended too much on their parents and allow them to make decision for them.
Secondly, by advancing in technology, people can obtain every information they want by searching on the Internet. they can read different experiences written by individuals who have experienced the same situations, while parents maybe do not have enough information about given circumstances. For example, my parents have not continued their study after their bachelor degree. therefore, when I decided to pursue my study in Ph.D. program, they did not have any idea about what should I do to become successful in Ph.D. entrance exam. I searched different websites and got a great deal of information guaranteed my acceptance in exam.
All in all, I really believe that parents should allow their offspring to decide for their life alone. this is because, not only have young people become educated, but also advanced technology helps them better than parents do. Hence, should parent trust their children's decision, juvenile’s success is certain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, by and large, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25212464589 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87012041302 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555240793201 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4317511095 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37166200964 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107709483613 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860009273771 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227246386264 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935578205166 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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