As the world improves, there are lots of social phenomenon being beginning to change correspondingly, one of which is that the young generation are increasingly making their own decisions about their personal developments, even though some people disagree with this or can't notice this tendency. I have to admit that it's indeed happening nowadays. I feel this way for two main reasons, and I will develop these ideas by subsequent paragraphs.
Admittedly, parents still play crucial role in making decisions for their children, but either those parents are in limited numbers or the facts have been exaggerated to some extent. It is undeniable that parents do have rich experience which will be helpful to guide their kids, but the ultimate purpose lies in young people's own capacities of dealing with diverse hardships and setbacks. Hence, making decisions by the young themselves is supposed to hold a dominant position, rather than giving this right to their parents.
Generally, nowadays the cutting-edge technologies enable the young generation to be confident of making their own decisions without the help of other experienced people. Contrary to the past when information is extremely limited and hard to obtain, the young living in current era have tremendous advantages over information or guidance. For example, in the past, when we are required to select our ideal university, due to lack of reference information, we virtually follow our parents’ suggestions. By contrast, currently, the Internet provides almost everything including the ranking of the university, the best subject and the size of the campus, all the information can be known before you step into the university.
On the other hand, parents today place more emphasis on children's independence. Parents are gradually aware of the importance of the young generation's ability to make decisions or self-management. Clearly, they understand that there are a great number of vibrant competitions awaiting for their kids. If those young people are not prepared mentally or physically to face such situation, it is just like a bunch of fish into a tank full of sharks, they won't survive. Thus, parents set out to give young people enough freedom to foster their personal capacities at the very beginning. Under this kind of environment, today young generation with no doubt are better able to be determined when they come across specific issues that are important to their life.
To sum up, the techniques and parents' role are responsible for the phenomenon that young generation are more independent of making decisions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...hough some people disagree with this or cant notice this tendency. I have to admit t...
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Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...ly aware of the importance of the young generations ability to make decisions or self-manag...
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Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: awaiting; waiting for
... a great number of vibrant competitions awaiting for their kids. If those young people are n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, thus, for example, i feel, kind of, no doubt, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3196125908 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93535379591 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581113801453 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.493745252 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.235294118 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40546909311 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116516187426 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718642027003 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216478972625 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630332701525 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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