Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the down of the word, parents have an indispensable role in conducting their child toward a successful life and this role never eliminated but the amount of this role changed in accordance with the living condition. These days, a plethora of peoples are of the opinion that the youngsters who live in these they are more independent than those who live in the past. After regarding different factor into consideration, I, totally support this idea that the young peoples in these days have a better ability to make a decision than their previous counterparts. In the following paragraph, I will elaborate more details to explain my point of view.
The first and most exquisite reason which come to my mint to substantiate my standpoint referring that the youngsters who live in this era are more knowledgeable and have a broader horizon. Actually, this day there are manifold places in which young people can learn about others experiences and increase their knowledge about the life. For example, in the schools, children attend in the different class in which they learn different things which provided them sufficient information for encountering with difficulties. In addition, these days there are countless movies that mimic the real-life; during these movies, several moral points introduce which broaden mankind horizon. For example, washing a movie that depicts a youngster’s failure after an incorrect decision, provided youngsters a valuable information for coping with a similar circumstance. Take my own experience into consideration, last year, when I was struggling to choose the university field, I asked some question from my parents, but, because they did not have suitable experience, in this case, could not help me. So, I decided to rely on my own knowledge and search more and more.
Another important reason that deserves some words is that the parents in the past were the only acceptable source or information for children, in fact, they were the only role model for them. Consequently, for being same as their parents, they had tried to learn from them and this increased their dependence on parents.
Make a long story short, by considering all the aforementioned reasons into consideration, I, totally support this idea that these days the youngsters are more autonomous because of they're the broad horizon, more knowledge of real life and the experiences that they acquire from their parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, if, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21683673469 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89610708098 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6965631153 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.071428571 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191933539883 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692106569077 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059932943586 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122559229705 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394389974803 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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