Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People are never satisfied with what they have they always want something more or something different Use Specific reasons to support your answer
I agree with this statement that people are never satisfied with what they have and always want something different. I think we are modern humans who live in a modern world where every day is shown to us new things and we feel new demands. There are different reasons I feel in this way, which I explain further.
In the past, there was no internet network and social media, people in the same place had close connections with each other and because they grew up with the same culture, they had similar demands. citizens in society did not have too much information about what others in different places of the world wanted or what they had. citizens reached their goals and were so satisfied with what they had. but nowadays with the development of the internet and social media, the world is just like a small village and people from all over the world are in connection with each other. people can see what others have and compare it with what they themselves have. And this is one of the reasons that make people unhappy about their achievements.
On the other hand, by developing huge companies that make unnecessary products, and in order that sell their products, they should make new needs for people and make them unsatisfied. I explain my experience about when I feel unsatisfied about what I have; last year I had a simple cellphone and it was suitable for me. But I was exposed to advertising for a new phone that has three cameras and it was so tempting for me. I spent all of my savings for buying a phone that I saw in the advertising. When I bought that phone I found that it worked similar to my old phone but I spent a lot of money for having that.
In conclusion, I think the development of social media and increasing the number of huge companies that make new products, are the main reasons that make people unhappy about what they have.
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Suggestion: But
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Suggestion: People
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i feel, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51479289941 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40467577855 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46449704142 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6737398851 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.733333333 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304260124367 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122157043954 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14513243281 0.0737576698707 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190505088513 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109228374493 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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