Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
In today's world where the majority of people are leading a hectic lifestyle, taking travel is one of the plausible activities that can promote their tempers. Some people think that it is more beneficial for them to experience domestic travel then international travel; however, the others disagree. I am in agreement with the former group in what follows, I will aptly elaborate my viewpoint.
The first and paramount reason is that the expense of traveling abroad is prohibitive. It is because international travel entails varied measures that cost visitors substantial money. Individuals, who tend to take a journey to a foreign country, have to take a valid passport, buy travel insurance, apply for the visa of their destination, schedule an appointment for visa interview, and convert their money to the local currency of that country. These along with the expenditure of booking an accommodation and a flight are sufficient to dissuade people from taking a trip to other countries. On the other hand, all people need to travel around their countries is reserving a hotel room and a flight. Consequently, domestic travel is more economical than abroad travel.
Moreover, people can use trip time effectively if they travel in their own familiar countries. Internal travel offers people an opportunity to reach their destinations faster. Visitors, then, are able to spend much more time visiting various historical sites, attending local events, and leisure activities. What makes international travel tiring is that it is virtually a long journey and involves connecting flights. Furthermore, those who travel across their countries do not have a language barrier leading to some troubles taking up the time that can be dedicated to doing more sightseeing. They are able to communicate with local residences and gain information about the place readily. On the contrary, exotic tourists are more likely to encounter problematic situations. For instance, last summer, I traveled to Paris where the majority of its people spoke French. Since I could not speak their language, spotting the location of tourist' attractions, restaurants, and taking taxis made the travel difficult for me and wasted my time. If I had traveled throughout my country, I would be able to visit various places where I have never been.
It might be said that there are some positives in taking a journey to other countries, most notably the experience and knowledge about various culture and traditions that may be attained. Despite this for many people, this pleasure is outweighed by the issues that have negative effects on their time and budget.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that experiencing domestic travel is more advantageous to people. Not only does it cost them less money, But it also helps them spend much more time on pleasures.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2378.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23788546256 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87421218662 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544052863436 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8811334771 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.391304348 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7391304348 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34782608696 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296722947988 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896349218132 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596861146429 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152541151981 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816481197464 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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