For decades, people have always migrated from one place to another by various means of transportation such airplanes, cars, ships, trains, boats and so on. Traveling is one of the great ways people can become abreast with their environment, people and the world as a whole. Recently, people have come up with arguments on reviewing the merits of travelling within their own country versus travelling to other foreign countries. In my opinion, I believe that the benefits of travelling to foreign countries far outweighs travelling within a small country.
To begin with, travelling to a foreign country creates the opportunity to become exposed to life. This is paramount because it widens a person's horizon in various perspectives of life. These perspectives of life can range from cultural, social, behavioral, religion, to mention but a few. In terms of cultural, it enables you to see a different way by which a certain group of people behave based on the beliefs which tends to align with both their mental and psychological behavior. With this knowledge, it molds your relationship with people and enables you to have a better way to treat and respect people based on their cultural standards. For example, last year I travelled to Nigeria in Africa. In one part of the country I observed that the senior citizens were greeted by prostrating on the floor. This was an astounding experience I have never witnessed as I came from an area where such gestures are never carried out. Consequently, with such an experience, it exposes one to the different norms and beliefs of people .
In addition, travelling worldwide enables one to leave his comfort zone. Travelling to foreign countries poses lots of challenges which tests our perseverance in life. It brings out the greater part of us by instilling boldness and firmness in the midst of tribulations or threats. For example, when one travels to foreign country, where language can be a barrier, he or she adjusts and struggles to get used to the language in order to carry out certain things he needs to achieve. Therefore, leaving the comfortability of your zone makes one more willful to take up challenges.
In conclusion, it is undoubtedly that the advantages of travelling to foreign countries is not more than travelling within the country as one leaves his comfort zone and faces more challenges of life and at the same time gain more experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99753694581 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88383225564 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522167487685 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2980229082 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.789473684 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332646094583 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993210626218 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742022296437 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210720993926 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665583805491 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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