The lecturer disputes some interesting recent findings about the remains of the exact animal tissues of Tyrannosaurus. He suggests that a close observation should be carried out on the investigation.Hence, he finds the research unconvincing.
The reading posits that while conducting the research,the fossilized leg bone showed the presence of soft, flexible organic substance inside the branching channels.However, the lecturer refutes this by saying that the presence of blood vessels may represent something else. He explained that long ago when an organism dies, bacteria's colonizes the bones and creates a hollows. As a result, the bacteria leaves traces of organic materials. It is probable that those traces are moist soft residues of the bacteria.
Second, the lecturer contends that primitive animals did not posses red blood vessels when they once lived. More so,
the spheres were probably of different origin and consists of pieces of reddish neurons. On the contrary, the reading states microscopic examination depicted that presence of spheres which could be the remains of the red blood cells containing iron.
Finally, lecturer avers that collagen never existed in animals of 100 thousand years ago, which obviously contradicts the fact that Tyrannosaurus, an animal of 70 million years will definitely being void of collagen. He confirms that most recent evidence about the presence of collagen is in human skin. Therefore, it is feasible to say that those traces of collagen must have evolved when the researchers were carrying out the tests. On other hand, the reading holds an opposite view.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence
...uld be carried out on the investigation.Hence, he finds the research unconvincing. ...
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Suggestion: , the
...osits that while conducting the research,the fossilized leg bone showed the presence...
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Suggestion: However
...substance inside the branching channels.However, the lecturer refutes this by saying th...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hollow' or simply 'hollows'?
Suggestion: a hollow; hollows
...cterias colonizes the bones and creates a hollows. As a result, the bacteria leaves trace...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d vessels when they once lived. More so, the spheres were probably of different o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lagen is in human skin. Therefore, it is feasible to say that those traces of col...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46215139442 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94339005623 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 145.348785872 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0787451708 49.2860985944 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339342522203 0.272083759551 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989984996449 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794425359838 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16949700097 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493547447715 0.0443174109184 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.8541721854 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.