Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign country.

No one can deny that there are both negative and positive aspects of traveling in people’s own country and foreign countries. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely go on a trip in Azerbaijan, my homeland. I feel this way for a number of reasons which I will endeavor to expound upon in the following essay.

To begin with, individual’s own country is comfortable for him or her to travel. This is obvious that we could communicate with people who share the same language with us easily. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was ten years old, my parents made a decision to go other countries to spend vocation. We travelled to France, an extraordinary place for tourists, but we could not stay long on this country. Because we could not create a connection with other people, we returned to Azerbaijan to spend the rest time of holiday. All of us got treasure from trip inside the country, since our native people behaved friendly to tourists from Azerbaijan. Additionally, they afforded us with the house to sleep and gave us food. As a result, if we did not return to our country, we would spend our time vainly in France.

Secondly, traveling inside country will make people save their money. This is because traveling abroad could be significantly more expensive compared to traveling locally. For example, my friend went to Chicago and stayed here for two weeks approximately two years ago. This trip cost him higher than he expected because of flight payment, fees of the hotel, the food outlay and the admission fees of the recreation places. At the same time, I travelled in my own country with little money, but I enjoyed more opportunities than those of my friend. Moreover, I bought a computer to prepare for my exams with the rest of money. Therefore, if I made a trip in outside of my country, I could not gain from these advantages.

Taking everything mentioned into account, I firmly conclude that people make profit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. This is because they could create relationship with native people without difficulty. Also, trip inside country is financially preferable to travel to other country.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i feel, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87179487179 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81183279762 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3137209163 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.3636363636 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339508984205 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103242926417 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101878402342 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243761245943 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112966706472 0.0645574589148 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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