Traveling is crucial for everyone. It is one of the best to explore new things and get refreshment. People will get more benefit from traveling in their own country than from foreign countries. And, I support this for two reasons.
The main reason to support this statement that it saves money and time. For traveling own country doesn't need any special preparation like getting the visa, buying air-tickets which are too much costly and time-consuming. For example, I went to Japan last year for traveling. For this, I need to apply for a visa at least one month before my traveling date. And I had to book the air-ticket too early to get some deals. Overall, this took too much time to get prepared as well as it costed a lot more money comparing to travel own country. Because with the same amount of money I could travel my whole country for once. As we can see, I hadn't spent that money and time if I would travel my own country.
Another reason is that it is more fun and easier to travel own country. In own country, we can travel with more friends and family members. When you will travel with more acquainted, the journey will be more comfortable and jovial. And arranging this kind of arrangement is also easier in own country. For instance, once I wanted to arrange a family tour to our nearest country but I failed to arrange for all members. Because it is too costly and has so many difficulties to overcome. As a result, we able to go their only two members and it was a horrible expedition. We could not able to enjoy because we were missing the other family members. At last, we had back without spending the whole vacation. This experience taught me that spending a vacation with family and friends will be more fun in one's own country.
In sum, though some may disagree about traveling in own country is not more beneficial, it will be great for spending time with family and also save cost and time. By saving money and time you can travel your country more one time. So, travelling own country is more beneficial and one should spend more time to travel his country with his family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53403141361 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42235302841 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471204188482 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6959280687 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.28 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.28 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304261285037 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978271396507 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111631539002 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222532433748 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850624542625 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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