No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of internet in our daily life. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely select making using internet free for each citizen. It is my firm belief Internet has many pros for us for a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, Internet made life easier for teaching than before. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. Three years ago, anonymous virus had attack our earth, so every thing has stopped including education, works, and go outside homes, so it must be a solution for this massive problem. One of the most beneift of Internet was it helped students to continue their studies by taking either lectures or exams online. Consequently, today most universites and schools have another way for teaching their students in any time with harsh conditions like snow or diseases. On top of that by internet you have access to all books or videos around the world, so you can learn anything or visit any culture when you are at home. If I had used internet in the past, I would have more knowledge about more things.
Secondly, internet helps alot in government transactions like buy, sell and pay. Drawing from my own personal experience. in the past, if you have an electricity bill, you should go to electricity corporation to pay your bill and waste two hours just to pay it, but by using internet you can pay everything online without any effort or tiredness. Moreover, nowdays you can buy or sell any car or phone from far countries or from your home country just by enter to the required webiste and select the car you want. Undobutdely, Internet has some cons, but the conscious person have to use it in suitable way to take advantages from it.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that Internet made life simple and sufficient, so governemt should make it free. This is because teaching is easier and a lot of information are now available for each one for free and finishing any works that took few days to complete, now it take few minutes only.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...rawing from my own personal experience. in the past, if you have an electricity bi...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
... that took few days to complete, now it take few minutes only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67546174142 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54817070749 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575197889182 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3036465266 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.235294118 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213350099214 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680352433951 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04748356377 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119310968449 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426980855666 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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