Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rapid growth of a city has mainly positive impact on the society. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the boom of economy, many cities are undergoing significant changes. Some people maintain that these changes are beneficial and pose a positive impact on the society. A considerable number of opponents, however, argues that the growth of cities has many side-effects and might jeopardize the society. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that the rapid growth of cities can benefit the whole society. Here, I list two reasons to aptly substantiate my viewpoints.
First and foremost, the growth of a city allows more funds can be invested into the construction of public facilities which can benefit the whole society. It is undeniable that public facilities are a major part of the society, which can benefit all the citizen and improve the modernization of a society. A vivid example comes from my own experience. My home town, WuHan, used to be a big city, but many public facilities were in poor condition. Recent years, as the development of city, more and more public facilities are constructed , such as subway. These really bring plenty of convenience. I can now travel in the city more easily. There is no doubt that public facilities' construction contributes to the improvement of citizen living condition, which is a positive impact on the society.
Apart from that, the growth of cities also provides people with more opportunities which can further fasten the development of the society. As the growth of the society, many companies will move in the city which many attract many young people who are in search for jobs to move in the city. As we know, young people as the new blood of the society, is the foundation of the development of the society. If more and more capable young people move in cities and contribute to the city construction, the society will develop faster without a doubt.
Admittedly, a minority of people tend to believe that the growth of a city might bring many side-effects to the society, partly because that the construction of the city might cause the pollution to the environment which will jeopardize the society. Nevertheless, if we can analysis this perspective from another angle, we might realize that more and more cities are now concerned about how to develop while be environment-friendly. Thus further demonstrates my opinion.
In summary, the rapid growth of the city can promote the contruction of public facilities and attract more young people which are beneficial to the society. Contemplating all aforementioned reasons, we can safely draw the conclusion that the rapid growth of cities has a generally positive impact on the whole society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, thus, while, apart from, in summary, no doubt, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06221198157 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97495957333 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417050691244 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3266915123 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8636363636 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133845855679 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501785225155 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406642924026 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988621695685 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414903775035 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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