Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Reading is more educational than watching movies or TV Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Reading is more educational than watching movies or TV.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, people no longer enjoy reading as before. However, it is important for human beings to read for several reasons. I totally agree with the following statement. First, reading is the bottom of our education due to the fact that reading taught us how to read, to spell, and to write, you cannot spell your name without knowing how to read and you have to know how to read to write correctly, reading can increase your vocabulary there is a lot of complex words that some author like to use in their books that can expand your knowledge ,writing and your speaking . Secondly, reading requires the brain to work more it is significant for people to read because that will keep the brain active in a positive way that can avoid them to be stressful reading it's necessary for human it provides us how to be creative, smarter and successful in what we are accomplishing in life. there are lot of great men who became successful because of their knowledge such as Nelson Mandela, Albert Einstein, Mahatma Gandhi and so on. These are people that can inspire you to become better and succeed in life . For example Denzel Washington is one of my favorite celebrities in life. I admire him because he motivate me and encourage me to push myself when I want something he also inspired me to be determined in life to go forward.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eir books that can expand your knowledge ,writing and your speaking . Secondly, re...
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Suggestion: .
...our knowledge ,writing and your speaking . Secondly, reading requires the brain t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur speaking . Secondly, reading requires the brain to work more it is significant...
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Line 1, column 701, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...because that will keep the brain active in a positive way that can avoid them to be stressful rea...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...l in what we are accomplishing in life. there are lot of great men who became success...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...you to become better and succeed in life . For example Denzel Washington is one of...
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Line 1, column 1200, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'motivates'.
Suggestion: motivates
...rities in life. I admire him because he motivate me and encourage me to push myself when...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 236.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61016949153 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51596133443 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597457627119 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.027333721 48.9658058833 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.888888889 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182540407645 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742879799174 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845314177322 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182540407645 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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