Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Reducing global environmental damage should be handled by government rather than individuals. Give specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
No one can deny the fact that owing to the global warming, environment today has been deteriorating day by day over the past few decades. In the given scenario whether it is the duty of administration or individual itself to lessen the damage is a trigger heated debate. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly both government and every single people can have impact on maintaining environment however, government’s proper policy regarding managing environmental issue could be of great help . I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence, with industrialization many factories and industries are elevating in number and this has created a huge effect on environment as it is the principle agent for the emission of harmful chemical. In addition, this can be controlled only if government made policy of restriction in building factories unless it is required. For instance, in order to establish industry in a specific society then there there must be the rule of attaining approval of government as well as nearby neighborhood concerning it’s benefits and ramifications. This way, government could manage to limit the construction of industries to some extent which consequently contributes to the healthy ambiance.
Next, we all people on earth are paying taxes in every aspects to government such as house tax, salary tax, income tax and so on. Furthermore, this is the great source of fund that could be allocated for renovating damages in environment. To exemplify, government can use this collected sum for planting trees, conducting programs pertaining to the conservation of nature and so on. Indeed, there are plentiful of ways that government can allocate this money. Hence, they must be responsible and mindful of the repercussion that we are facing due to the environmental damages and should plan policy accordingly.
The above stated statement sounds reasonable yet individual play a vital role towards the preservation of nature which should not be overlooked. Needless to say, every citizen on this globe can contribute to the creation of healthy environment. For example, wastes are the inevitable part of our life and if we manage this garbage in a right way, we are indirectly helping in creating pollution free world. Moreover, this does not merely benefit us but world as a whole.
All things considered, despite the fact that individual can be impactful in some ways if there is something enacted by government then everyone is compelled to follow and we are aiding by paying subsides and tax to administration. Hence, government is powerful and must be responsible to handle the environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...vironmental issue could be of great help . I feel this way for several reasons whi...
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Message: Did you mean 'principal' (=main)?
Suggestion: principal
...huge effect on environment as it is the principle agent for the emission of harmful chemi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: there
...ish industry in a specific society then there there must be the rule of attaining approval ...
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Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
... well as nearby neighborhood concerning it’s benefits and ramifications. This way, g...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... our life and if we manage this garbage in a right way, we are indirectly helping in creating ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.0752688172 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23611111111 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14464520668 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550925925926 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4645008274 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.052631579 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7368421053 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57894736842 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174635128439 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580759763665 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462807662749 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105131883458 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284287696931 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.