Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Students should be encouraged to take courses like science, technology, engineering and math that are likely to lead to job opportunities rather than subjects they might be interested in.
Whether students should choose courses that could lead to job opportunities is a good question. Some people state that taking courses that are easy to find jobs could lead to a better future, therefore students should be encouraged to take these courses. However, from my point of view, I think students should actually choose the courses that they are interested in.
To begin with, if all students are encouraged to choose courses that could to better job opportunities, some of them will have a disgusting feeling about these subjects. In the long run, students may probably lose their interest in study because the subject they choose are the ones that confusing them a lot. For some liberal art students, they are interest are in reading historical books, writing articles about philosophy and talking about autobiography of some celebrities. Asking them to do experiment, having a lot of calculations would even be chores and study burdens for them. As a result, they would rather use their times on the playground or on the Internet, instead of wasting time on learning subjects that are not suitable for study.
In addition, if all students entering courses that could offer great opportunities for occupation, this may create a burden for the whole society. Large number of students only choosing majors that could find jobs easily would cause the problem of the uneven profession division in the community. The unbalance of the occupational distribution would lead to the cease of the economic growth and even disintegration of the social system. Lacking of human resource to do jobs in the fields of agriculture and service would hinder the advancement of the society.
Therefore, different students should choose different courses in order for the sustainable development of the nation.
In conclusion, based on the reasons that studying courses that could lead to better job opportunities could cause the problem of making some of the students feeling tired of learning and impeding the development of the whole society, letting students to choose courses that they are interest in may be a sound choice.
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...tudents to choose courses that they are interest in may be a sound choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, talking about, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77587349135 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486956521739 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.569647773 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260367133837 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995207053272 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629185265058 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158191943266 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774423727445 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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