Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The current century has indeed witnessed a rapid growth in tecnology, so much so that people have even considered the possibility of commercial space travel as something not very far away. There has been major innovations in the mode of transports as well, with high-speed bullet trains already open to public use and Tesla-made transporation pods undergoing rapid testing and developments under the supervision of Elon Musk, the so-called real-world 'Iron Man'. However, I do not foresee a shift in the usage or number of cars in the next twenty years. I do believe that the technology involved would undergo tremendous tranformations, but i dont agree with the fact the the numbers would reduce. And here are my reason.

Firstly, despite of the development of high speed transport, I believe that rapid evolvement in technology is more focussed on making a car more efficient rather than completely replacing it with another mode of transport. For example, if you see this from the lens of ecological conservations, tremendous efforts are being channeled into replacing the fuel used with Lithium ion batteries, rather than increasing incentives to use public transport and stop buying cars. Companies like Tesla are more concerned with coming up with more and more efficient electric vehicles, and even incentivising people to buy them. Even the cabs are going electric!

Secondly, another are where technology is being channeled into is making the cars autonomous, and again, Tesla seems to be at the forefront. Complicated Neural Network-based models and custom chips being developped by the company have even fast-tracked the production porcess and people eagerly wait for Tesla events to get a glimpse of the first fully-autonomous self-driving car. Many other companies,like Waymo, have also followed suit and are rapidly working towards developing self-friving cares using LiDAR technology. When you create this much hype of an enormously improved version of a car among people, I highly doubt that the demand would go down in the next twenty or even fifty years.

My third argument, although not as strong as the two mentioned, would be on the general improvement in standards of living globally. With more number of high paying jobs and more disposable income in the hands of the working class, I beleive that poeple would definitely consider having perosnal modes of transporation. Also in times where there are pandemics,like the Covid-19 and Black Fungus, taking the entire world by shock, and social distancing creeping its way in the form of the 'new normal', I believ there would be lesser incentivces to take public transports and car pools to work.

So to summarise, even though there are proponents of the the other side who voice that increase in the number of cars would be detrimental to the environment and that there should be more incentives to use public transport, I stronlgy believe the exact opposite. Technology is rapidly solving this long-standing issue of eco-friendly fuel usage and the global health crisis is supplementing to the fact that people would prefer more cars on the road rather than risk safely and health.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2652.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18982387476 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91771043581 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553816046967 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 825.3 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9054056307 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.0 100.406767564 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0588235294 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182295225982 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619609444828 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374008429795 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103763101417 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303179088951 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 11.7677419355 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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