Most people in the world spend part of their life using cars, for essential activities or for freedom activities. Personally, I believe that in twenty years there will be more cars in freeways than there are today. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, there are many companies offering cheaper cars since the technology improved and allowed them to create cars with cheaper raw materials. So, I think that annually more people are buying cars and increasing the number of cars on the streets. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Three years ago, I decided to buy a car. So, I started to save money. I looked for a car in different companies and I found that the minimum value was nearly ten thousand dollars. Thus, I needed a loan from a bank in order to reach my goal. However, this month, when my friend told me that he wanted to buy a car. He asked me for help in order to find a cheaper car. My surprise was that companies now are offering cars starting at five thousand dollars. This was a reduction of fifty percent of the price when I bought my car three years ago. Both cars have the same model, but the difference is that my friend's car has cheaper raw materials. Consequently, I strongly believe that in a few years the car's prices will be lower than they are today.
Secondly, the use of cars is constantly increasing because people need to travel longer distances in order to complete their activities. Today, with the growing of the cities toward zone unexploited conducted to growing of cars on the freeways. For instance, when I went to high school. I traveled on bike to go to high school since my high school was only twenty minutes from my house. Additionally, many mates were in the same situation. So, when I traveled towards my high school I saw fewer cars on the streets. Now that I took my nephew to school. I need to use my car because the school is several kilometers away. We traveled for one hours and we saw more cars on the way. Moreover, since there are so many cars on the street, we are sometimes delayed by about thirty minutes. Based on this experience, I feel that in several years there will be more cars on the streets.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that there will be a great number of cars on the street in several years. This is because cars are cheaper each year. In addition, the cities are growing more and more towards unexploited zones, thus, the use of cars will be more indispensable each time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... many mates were in the same situation. So, when I traveled towards my high school I saw...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one hour', 'an hour', or simply 'hours'?
Suggestion: one hour; an hour; hours
...everal kilometers away. We traveled for one hours and we saw more cars on the way. Moreov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49782608696 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49821391775 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441304347826 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3723338841 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9666666667 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218634264596 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660035340653 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618745124773 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161527058307 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278604062774 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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