Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

With the development of society, people's living standards are getting better and better, as well as their incomes are much better than before. In the meantime, the number of cars has also increased. According to the survey from the University of Utah, an average of 5 people owns a car, a 78% increase over 20 years ago. Therefore, I believe that in twenty years there will be more cars in use than there are today. In what follows, I will demonstrate my points by focusing on two reasons.

To begin with, as the acceleration of the pace of life, more and more people prefer to choose to live in suburb instead of downtown, they are more inclined to enjoy a quiet life. As a result, the car will become an essential tool in life. Moreover, in the next 20 years, the world's population will not decrease because of aging, because most countries are not developed countries, they need more labor to improve the country's economy. In this case, population growth will accompany the increasing demand for cars.

Another reason which deserves some words here is the field of New Energy, more and more automobile manufacturers start producing smart cars which can autopilot and equipped with the intelligent voice assistant. The important thing is it uses electricity instead of oil, which not only saving money for us, but also protect the environment. Compare with ordinary car, the smart car has more interesting functions and a higher cost performance that can cause more people to buy it. So, there will be more smart car on road in the future.

In a nutshell, the possibility of fewer cars in use is not high in the future since the population growing and development of the smart car. Therefore, we need to analyze the problem comprehensively and overcome the difficulty of environmental pollution, which our government should revise the strategies about the smart car and set up more charging stations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om the University of Utah, an average of 5 people owns a car, a 78% increase over...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...fe. Moreover, in the next 20 years, the worlds population will not decrease because of...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88307692308 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71537371974 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578461538462 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.364776178 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198310546115 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802546144688 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089938013183 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124238178328 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585809366698 0.0645574589148 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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