Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give the advantages of each and support your viewpoint.
When faced with the decision of learning a foreign language in our own country or studying abroad, quite a few people deem that learning language will be more efficient and economical in our nation, but others, in contrast, believe studying in the country which the foreign language is spoken as the primer choice and that is my point. I will demonstrate my viewpoint by the following reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for studying abroad is that there will be a better language atmosphere abroad than our nation. For instance, the things we look in their country are all of using foreign languages such as the menu, billing board, and information of products, which can greatly improve our vocabulary and language sense. When we read the newspaper or web passages, we would get more confidence to face them and understand the meaning that these articles want to convey to people.
Another reason can be seen by everyone is that learning language in the country in which it is spoken can have more opportunities to chat with natives. In my opinion, it is critical for us because the aim of learning a language is having a conversation with people in other countries and convey our ideas we want to express. For example, when I was a student at the University of Jiang Su, I made many foreign friends who studied in our school by entering the English club. During the period of contact with them, not only increased my oral speaking but opened the door of my study abroad dream, I wanted to learn their language, learning more knowledge about their culture and broaden my horizons.
In addition, these reasons are also usable when we consider the possibilities of working in their country. It is because we have studied in their country so that we can better work abroad. I do not deny we could not have a good life if we work in our own country, I just want to convey the idea that we would get a broader platform and development space when we work abroad.
In a nutshell, if we go abroad to learn a foreign language not only can provide a better atmosphere than our own country, but the most thing is we can chat with the natives and learn many things we have not known. And I firmly convinced that the experience abroad can benefit our futures and profit the whole life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66349206349 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58309327634 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48253968254 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9314678991 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.222222222 100.406767564 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.6045352989 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308594386702 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147245727551 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115316835285 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208249108468 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917683927855 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 11.7677419355 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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