The future of transportation was always a crucial thing in humans life. A controversial thing that is often raised regarding this topic is whether there will be more or fewer cars in the future. If I were obliged to choose, I would think that there will be more cars in twenty years.
To begin with, I believed that there will be more requests for buying cars from people in the next 20 years. Cars are more reachable these days than the past. young people will request a car as soon as they can. I believe my opinion is partially influenced by my personal experience. You see, I got my license immediately after I turned 18, and then I bought a car. But my dad got his license when he was 27. I think that's because he couldn't afford a car when he was 18.
Secondly, Recently various electric cars have been manufactured. I think people are more tend to buy an electric car than a gas car. Electrical cars are cheap and easy to maintain and drive. For instance, I know someone who never agreed to buy a car due to his respect for nature. He didn't want to pollute the air with the smoke of the car. Later he finds out he can buy an electric car that has no harm to the atmosphere and nature, and so he did.
I resist the temptation to explain more, hope there is enough information already. To sum it up, as the reasons suggest, there will be more cars in twenty years. because not only there will be younger people who want to buy a car but also people who didn't have a car because of their support of nature, now can have a nature friendly car indeed. So there will be more cars in twenty years from now.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Young
...ore reachable these days than the past. young people will request a car as soon as th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...got his license when he was 27. I think thats because he couldnt afford a car when he...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...hen he was 27. I think thats because he couldnt afford a car when he was 18. Secondl...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...a car due to his respect for nature. He didnt want to pollute the air with the smoke ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...here will be more cars in twenty years. because not only there will be younger people w...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...o want to buy a car but also people who didnt have a car because of their support of ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26058631922 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33437567821 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521172638436 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5567346219 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.35 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203430791915 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735875133641 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601441518156 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137009343139 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375799306448 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Young
...ore reachable these days than the past. young people will request a car as soon as th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...got his license when he was 27. I think thats because he couldnt afford a car when he...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...hen he was 27. I think thats because he couldnt afford a car when he was 18. Secondl...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...a car due to his respect for nature. He didnt want to pollute the air with the smoke ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...here will be more cars in twenty years. because not only there will be younger people w...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...o want to buy a car but also people who didnt have a car because of their support of ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26058631922 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33437567821 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521172638436 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5567346219 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.35 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203430791915 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735875133641 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601441518156 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137009343139 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375799306448 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.