Many people may have had experiences speaking in public. We often face situations to talk in front of many people. Even as students and adults, we have to do it. Speaking skills also have a lot of influence in our daily life. What if universities make all students take public speaking classes? I disagree with ‘Universities should require every graduating student to take public speaking courses.’ for the following reasons.
Firstly, it could be a waste of time. Not all jobs require public speaking ability. People with jobs that do not require public speaking skills do not have to spend time and money. It would be more economical and efficient if they spent time and money on their jobs and aptitudes. So it could be an act of wasting someone’s time and money.
Secondly, This class may have a negative impact on some people. It can be fatal, especially for those who are introverted and do not like to talk. The process of making presentations and grading people when they do not want to do so will only cause more damage to someone. Therefore we should consider that when universities should require every graduating student to take public speaking courses, there will be people who will suffer as much as those who will be effective.
Lastly, There are more economical and effective private education than standardized university classes. If it is cheaper and more effective, is it necessary to spend a lot of money on college classes? Recently, more efficient learning is possible due to the variety of teaching methods and media used, such as video and phone classes.
Accordingly, I object to ‘Universities should require every graduating student to take public speaking courses.’ I think it is a more desirable way for desired universities to selectively implement it. The quality of the classes will also go up if only desired universities implement it. Only those who need it, not their duties, should be chosen to achieve the happiness of the maximum number of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97313432836 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81357179276 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480597014925 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3532369272 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9523809524 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276284099309 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889388295706 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117992269823 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155551642101 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984980625977 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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