Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I, firmly believe that sports and social activities play vital role in our lives. No doubt, libraries and academic classes are equally important in student's life. But, we should not overemphasize, academic area only, leaving behind sports and social activities. It is the duty of university and government to provide equal funding. I, hold this opinion because of three different reasons which will be explained by me in subsequent paragraghs.
First and foremost, If sports area is funded by university, providing better sports equipments, tennis courts, a special trainer for training sessions, football and volleyball fields, making a University team. Then, some of the students under proper supervision and guidance of couch, can grab state/National medals. Which, inturn will bring recognition to the university.
Second, University is responsible for the wholistic development of the graduates, which includes healthy body, mind and soul. Sports and social activities will enhance their pysical and mental strength. For eg, playing football as a sport, leads to development of critical thinking and analyzing the opponents strategies. Moreover, many researches have proved that pursuing any of the sport sharpens mind. So, university should invest in overall upliftment of students.
Lastly, Social activities such as inter- university programs, competitions, celebrations helps to explore the inner potential of many students. For instance, Some students might have talent of singing or dancing or playing guitar. If, they are given chance to perform on stage, they will feel motivated to pursue that further. Social activities helps to know our strengths and weaknesses. It teaches basic human qualities to students such as co-operation, sportsmanshi and brotherhood. These learnings will always remain with them during their life time. Therefore, university should provide funding for such activities mandatorily.
In conclusion, Libraries and academic classes should be taken care of as these are important part of education, along with equal focus on sports and social activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74358974359 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92998508926 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8815595265 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199872463753 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586663005225 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519086640038 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123041017776 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059769535196 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.42 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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