Do you agree or disagree with the
following statement?
A university education should
be provided free of charge to all
interested scholars.
Use examples and reasons to
support your position.
The university education play pivotal role in the any student's life. Some people think that this university education should be free of charge for all the students. I agree with that opinion of the people. I have two reasons for that, which i will explain in this essay.
First of all, the university education should accessible to all the citizen of the nation. To make things real this education should be free of cost. It will increase the number graduate students and job worker in the country. For instance, I completed my graduation from Navsari agricultural university, Navsari, India. This university is provide the agricultural knowledge free of cost to the students of this stream. So, many students who are coming from the poor background is always wants to get admission in this field. As a result, of that they can get higher education and become source of earning money for their family.
Secondly, By that way nation is manufacturing the talented youth for the nation growth. very students is getting university level study because it is free of cost. It will reflect to the country in the form of rich industruial and economic development of the nation. For example, my cousin brother is wanted to be engineer. So, he choose science stream after his 10th grade. After completing his scooling he get admission in the university, where tution fees are totally waved out by the goverment. So, he completed his study free of cost. Get placement in the top steel manufacturing company. Now, he is doing great job in the steel industry and recently, he was developed one technique, by which we can make more strong steel. So, by that way he is contributing in the economic growth of the nation. This is all possible just due to that free education.
To wrap things up, I believe that nation should keep their university study free of cost for their citizen. Because it will become accessible to all and because it will developed the mindset of the youth and it will turns up into the massive growth of the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Suggestion: provided
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...f that they can get higher education and become source of earning money for their...
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...rother is wanted to be engineer. So, he choose science stream after his 10th grade. Af...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
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...grade. After completing his scooling he get admission in the university, where tuti...
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Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'develop'
Suggestion: develop
...e accessible to all and because it will developed the mindset of the youth and it will tu...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'turn'
Suggestion: turn
...ed the mindset of the youth and it will turns up into the massive growth of the natio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81428571429 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61816106207 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3576781079 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.2083333333 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173387800839 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570978722407 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696185982218 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127117198943 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741179227928 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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