Children's are innocent and they easily attract the negative things. The children's are not consider the mature and during the teenage parents should take more attention to the child activities. The television is one part of our life. Whenever, people are free mostly they prefer to watch the movies, shows, news, and songs. A most controversial question is watching television is bad for the children. Some people believe that watching television is good for the children. However, I certainly agree that watching television is negative consequent of the kid’s life. I choose my stance for myriad considerations which are describe in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, watching television causes the decrease the study performance is most detrimental effect on the children's education. Kids are more allure to cartoon shows and cinema. They most of time spend on the watching shows as result, less concentration toward the study. The research in Hardware universities reveals that children are addicted to watching television cause 70 percentage children decrease the overall grades in exam.
Furthermore, children are free time spend on the television and less time engage on physical activities and outdoor game such as cricket, hide and seek, jump rope and hopscotch which are help to children development and make stronger body. Since less physical activities, increase the chance of the serious disease an example of diabetes type 2, obesity etc.
Moreover, in the television, huge serials, movies and advertisement which are negative influence of children mind. For instance, chocolate, candy, electronic gadget advertise is mislead to children and watching this kinds of ad the children force to parents for buying that thing which is not healthier for children health, not useful things and very expensive.
In conclusion, contemplating aforementioned reasons, television is not only bad impact on the children education but also it is effect on the kid’s health. I strongly concur that watching television is bad for the children because of the decrease the study performance, harm for mentally and physical health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48640483384 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91051198891 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537764350453 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9018374662 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280683505184 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952815188785 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731364443665 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158551873133 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513384499932 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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