Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, some students face difficulties dealing with school assignments. Many teachers assign students to work alone rather than working with partners. However, personally, I think that teachers should assign students to work together since working together can have beneficial learning role.
First, when students work together, they can enhance their friendship relation. Several students suffer from lacking friend’s relationship during school, although once they work within project together, they start to mate with other students. As an example, when I transferred to new school during my high school, I did not have any friend. I used to stay alone during breaks and I felt sad most of the time. Yet, when my math teacher assigned me to work with other two girls, Sarah and Najla, I started to know them. Later on, Sarah and Najla became one of my best friends in high school. Today, we still meet each other weekly and I thank the math assignment that gathered us together.
Secondly, group working might improve student’s mistake faster. Mistakes are always a critical point in many assignments and learning from mistakes would need time. This time can be reduced when students learn from each other alternatively to working alone. Every student has different qualities such as typing, writing, hard-working, and reading. For example, if the teacher asked a group of students to work on a history project, the group would divide themselves into sub-groups. Some sub-groups would be responsible for gathering information. Another sub-group would work on typing the project and so on. Hence, students struggle with typing can learn from the typing group. Therefore, students would learn from their mistakes effectively and in a short period of time.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that teachers should let students work together. I believe it in this way because working together may help students in learning from their errors and they can refine their friendship.
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... and they can refine their friendship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3619047619 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68962902802 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1451533992 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4285714286 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360854593465 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120287381163 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822026477003 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237159426654 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453068191722 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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