Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As workers, we deal with a lot of things during the workday. Some people propose that one may be more delighted when these things are different than similar. In my opinion, I totally agree with this argument, especially when the following statement are taken into consideration.
To begin with, different kinds of things make people less boring. When one do all the same tasks all day long, s/he may feel boring, which harms workers' satisfaction. For example, when I was a senior high school student, I volunteered to be a teaching assistant in a English school. At first, I was told to score the students' paper handed in, which was terribly boring. I felt lonely and was unsatisfied with my decision. Consequently, I found the man who was in charge to get some help. He arranged me to teach classes in the morning and just do my original job in the afternoon. In this way, I felt better and worked harder.
Secondly, different types of tasks can bring more knowledge to people. Tasks need to be solved under the guidance of knowledge. When there are more kinds of jobs, more knowledge is required. By learning these amount of knowledge, people, especially students, are more satisfied. In a company, where I did my internship, I discovered that product managers are more satisfied with their jobs than software developers. It is because that product managers' work content is wider than that of software developers. As I can saw, managers would have a meeting, talk with consumers, and other kinds of work all day long. However, developers just set in front of screens and type codes, which is much more boring.
Admittedly, similar tasks can bring more experience to workers because practice makes perfect. However, with the above two advantages that different kinds of jobs can bring about, similar tasks will not bring more satisfaction.
In conclusion, I hold the point that with different types of jobs, workers may feel more satisfied and delighted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...lighted when these things are different than similar. In my opinion, I totally agree...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lunteered to be a teaching assistant in a English school. At first, I was told to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, all the same, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94561933535 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70308515294 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4132782369 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.4090909091 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0454545455 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304378182708 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810141573048 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620901644273 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163635237938 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246249448062 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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