Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Workers are one of the most -if not the most- important parts of a running business. It is always a matter of debate among managers whether they should take a specific tasks to the workers or be more flexible. It is my firm belief that if there were different variety of tasks for employees, they could be more satisfied. There are some reasons led me to this belief.
First, workers are the beating heart of a factory. The process of taking care of a range of different duties might boost the sense of creativity in laborers and more creative a person be, more sense of satisfaction he will have. Moreover, doing the same task everyday could led the personal to intolerable exhaustion. For instance, imagine a factory in which, every single worker doing the exact same job everyday, how frustrated will the they be. The more they be tired, the less satisfaction they will have.
Furthermore, being more engaged into a business make the employees to feel the sense of having skin in the game. Drawing from my own experience in my father's factory, the workers that their duty is more than being just an operator, are much more enthusiastic in their job. They work harder although they have to face more responsibilities doing a wide variety of tasks. This kind of passion in the work is because they feel important to the board community.
In light of reasons mentioned, although there are always some exceptions which are excluded from general rule, I strongly believe that doing different types of tasks make employees feel more important, rather than doing similar job everyday, and feeling important will lead them to the sense of more satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: every day
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Suggestion: every day
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85211267606 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61612846573 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5273739341 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278531600611 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100601428918 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630272102004 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181808799954 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016847422808 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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