Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Communities are very important for people because they grow in their. In order to make their next generation get a good quality of education or environment, people who grow in there should undertake some responsibilities of communities. Nevertheless, it is no doubt the importance of community is gradually diminishing because of a lot of aspects. Although nowadays we can see or sound a majority of reports via television programs or social media that there are some people devote in communities construction, young people are not having a enough contribution to their small society. My reasons will be explained below.
Personally, young people do not have sufficient time to help their communities. As we all know, there are plenty of demands for youngsters and these come from different aspects, such as family, school and society. From family perspective, parents want their children more independent to forefront their incoming college life because in that time, they need to manage their life independently. Therefore, what the parents do? Obviously, they will assign some tedious tasks for their children, like washing all members dishes after dining, dusting all furniture in home and raking leaves in garden. Those chores need to taking a multitude of time to finish only because their parents want to foster children's independence. From school perspective, professors or teachers assign a lot of homework and young people's schedule are pretty tight, which means they stay up frequently to complete those coursework. Because of reasons above, life is harsh for young people, let alone help their communities. Admittedly, some senior high school require young people do some volunteer work for their communities and this is their graduation requirement. It look well but in order to meet this requirement for graduation, they do not have any passions for volunteer and reason is obvious because it seem like voluntary but actually is compulsory. So, when they graduate, they will not do volunteer work anymore.
Socially, adolescents prefer do other things rather than make a positive contribution towards their communities. There are overwhelming evidence via some questionnaires or a myriad of studies to show that this generation is the most tech-savviest: 58% young people use mobile phone and 38% use tablet. Surfacing in internet is the most prevalent way for entertainment. When they do not study, they will make leisure time a priority. Nevertheless, youngsters do not enjoy natural beauty, such as tranquil water of lakes, and they like to play video games. It goes without saying that in all vacation, like in summer, they spend spare time on internet or chatting with their friends. According to their logic, they do not regard help their communities as a obligation and is a choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nstruction, young people are not having a enough contribution to their small soci...
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Message: Did you mean 'this coursework' or ''?
Suggestion: this coursework;
...ans they stay up frequently to complete those coursework. Because of reasons above, life is hars...
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Message: Did you mean 'looks'?
Suggestion: looks
...his is their graduation requirement. It look well but in order to meet this requirem...
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Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...unteer and reason is obvious because it seem like voluntary but actually is compulso...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...do not regard help their communities as a obligation and is a choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2358.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26339285714 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96067645482 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5818367781 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.52173913 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4782608696 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34782608696 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264612948505 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878049952992 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660153308718 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190471376208 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188699945667 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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