The topic about all college students should be required to take basic science subject even it is not their major is debatable. In my opinion, I refutes that basic science courses have to be mandatory to all of the university students. I hold this opinion for three reasons.
First of all, some of the students do not have interest at all in science when they decided to choose non-science major. Because of that, they will become lazy to study it and eventually they may get bad score. Somehow these bad score will affect their transcript which will be needed to apply job. Many jobs require good transcript so it will be a bad thing for the students if they get bad score.
Second, all of university students has already faced basic science in their previous education. In many countries, elementary and high school students must learn science and mathematics so I think it will be enough for them. I think the students have already know how to calculate numbers. Moreover, I think it will wasting the time if they should repeated the same materials that they already learned in schools.
Third, it will not help the students for their next career. For instance, a lawyer does not have to know how to solve some algebra equation to solve a court case. Still, a law student has to learn many law courses such as public or private case in their college and there will be no enough time to study basic science.
In conclusion, I do not think that required basic science courses is suitable for the students. There will be disadavantage if it happened.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ir major is debatable. In my opinion, I refutes that basic science courses have to be m...
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Suggestion: all the
...science courses have to be mandatory to all of the university students. I hold this opinio...
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...ion for three reasons. First of all, some of the students do not have interest at all in...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'known'.
...them. I think the students have already know how to calculate numbers. Moreover, I t...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'waste'
...late numbers. Moreover, I think it will wasting the time if they should repeated the sa...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, third, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70072992701 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4457238902 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496350364964 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1967045535 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298760156717 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114522381677 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105795402199 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198364849924 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916419774286 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.