Nowadays young people like to explore many things like traveling very far or studying abroad. However, socitiey think young people do not have allocation time to helping their community. I disagree with this opinion in three reasons.
For one thing, many young people realize that the experience can be achieved not only from traveling by meeting new people but also can be get by helping communities. For example, there are many volunteer program to teach in remote area. And in that program, there are many young people who want to participate to the program so they have to be follow selection program. Moreover, in my college, I usually be asked by some of my pals to help them teach the children in orphan house near my campus.
Next, internet especially instagram help the spread of the information when someone share their experience when helping communites. There are many likes in that instagram photo and many comments ask how to participate in that program. That show how young people like giving their time to participate in communities.
Third, in my residents, there are always program that held once a month where the young residents working together to clean the neigbors environment. All of my friends participate in that program because we know that this is the right time to gather together because we already busy with our activitiy in the other time. We will also can interact with the other older people or discuss about the plan to develop our residents.
In summary, young people still like to give their time to helping their communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'programs'?
.... For example, there are many volunteer program to teach in remote area. And in that pr...
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be usually
...ion program. Moreover, in my college, I usually be asked by some of my pals to help them t...
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'shares'.
... spread of the information when someone share their experience when helping communite...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, still, third, for example, in summary, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54044420315 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2637294149 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244355741275 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980922707564 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927696509464 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171464626934 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890161470947 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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