Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
No one deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of telling the truth. Even though, some people believe that it is better to not tell the truth because of the fact that can hurt people but in my firm belief it is much better to tell the truth and I think so for two reasons, and I will explore this reasons in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, I think telling the truth is better because in that case people can face the reality sooner. It is so vivid that hearing the truth is not that much fun in lots of cases but it could be beneficial for the person that hearing it. I have to admit that my last statement has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, when I was student at the California university, I had friend whose name was John. One time he believed that he is going to be a big football player. He actually tried so hard to become a great one but in one game match his ankle got serious injury. The doctors were hesitated to tell him that he is not going to play football anymore but his father thought he should know this news. SO they told him that he is not going to be able to play anymore. At first, he was angry and disappointment but after some time he absorbed that fact and tried to get along with this bitter fact and now he is working as business man and he is much happier than he was before. This example of my own experience could show the value of telling the truth to someone.
Secondly, I believe when you tell the truth to someone you actually get that person trust and attention. It is clear that all of us expect our close people to tell us the truth because otherwise we can not trust them. For instance, one time my friend Mark hid something from me. He was my close friend and he still is but I could not tolerate the fact that he is hiding something from me. So I ended my friendship with him at that point. I though it is weird that he does not share anything with me. I though that I can not trust him anymore. At last he explained that he was trying to protect me by not telling me the truth. He believed that he is making the right decision but I was wondering that how can I trust him anymore. For the reasons like this I think that it is better to tell the truth all the time.
In light of above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that telling the truth is the best choice and I think that it would be better to deal with the fact and reality and also with telling the truth you can gain the attention and trust of people. Also it might be other reasons about this topic but in my view these two reasons are more important than other reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...that it is better to not tell the truth because of the fact that can hurt people but in my firm belief i...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...gain the attention and trust of people. Also it might be other reasons about this to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i think, in my view, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.0286738351 245% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 107.0 43.0788530466 248% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 510.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18039215686 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17565432494 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409803921569 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2645154386 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8333333333 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139162718258 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496158728586 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513549405111 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111372205173 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336944892551 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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