Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
In today's economy system, we do not enough time to make mistakes. There is a very siriase competetive reation among different companies. As a result, not only we do not have enough time to make risky mistakes but also, we have much more compare that we can easily be replaced with them by comparing with the past. Moreover, the number of educated people are increased these days and as an employe we can lose our job by performing our duty slowly.
The first and possibly the most important reason why I consider this way is that, today work have been became much more competitive than before. In other word, in our the time of our parents the number of company which produce shoes for example was limited, however, nowadays we have lots of marks and brand which all produse shoes. If one of this company made their products fast and in a bad quality just because of time, it would lose their costumer absolotly.
There is another subtle word that we could consider, which is the fact that, there are lots of the unemploee people who have recently educated from different universities. If we do not perform our task carefully and swiftly, we are going to lose our job easily. Moreover, jobs are became really merit base these days, comparing with the past. Companies have seeking for someone who knows how to do their tast perfectly and perform it as soon as it possible. So if you want to survive in todays work system, you should be careful consies and fast.
There is another word that we must consider is that just becase we do not have time and we want to have more profits, we should not betray our costumers and sell them a bad produst. A good company is a company which admire their costomers by giving them the best thing they produse.
In a word by taking to account all these reasons we may draw the conclosion that if we want to work in today’s work system although we have to be as fast as posiible, we should not make risky desition which may cause our product became unqualified. Because, we do not have time to redue them and also our costomers have rely on us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... this way is that, today work have been became much more competitive than before. In o...
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Line 6, column 281, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...lose our job easily. Moreover, jobs are became really merit base these days, comparing...
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Line 8, column 326, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
... redue them and also our costomers have rely on us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5617433414 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36655033266 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486682808717 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5932871985 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.091507871247 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492179186416 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969863479374 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963901454313 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140036725978 0.0645574589148 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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