Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In modern life, young people must face with many issues that they must have their own decision. They must choose what is your future job? what is your future family? And after having their decision, they need to decide how to get them. People, especially young people, they have a lot of ambitious, of course in order to complete those ambitious, people must have their plan to follow. People argue that young people should have the ability to plan and organize. In my opinion, I absolutely agree with this idea. I believe this skill is really essential if young people want to success in their life.
Modern life is very complex, so it is very necessity to plan and organize time. Time is what people have a lot and more importantly, it is free. However, it is also very important for people to manage time to do all work they need. Young people often do not have enough experiment, which make them can be enthuse too much on one thing and forget the others. As a result, young people have the risk of time-consuming on futile things. In my opinion, it is very important to plan their time for studying, playing and their family, friends. Besides that, when young people have boyfriend/ girlfriend, they can spend all their time for their lover and do not pay attention on other thing which are not less important than that. I recommend each young people should have a timetable, so they can organize their time more effective. There is a fact that, in order to make this timetable, people must know plan and organize skill, that is very important.
Additionally, each people have their own dreams future work, such as becoming doctor, teacher, professor or politician. However, they usually be limited by the question:" how to get this dream?". Personally, I believe that making plan skill is the first essential skill that young people need to complete their dream. For example, if your dream is becoming professor at a university. First of all, you must know how to get there, in particularly, you must study hard to have bachelor, after that is PHD degree. Besides that, you must have some skill to practice or teach students. It is really a lot of to do, however, it is not impossible. You can do from this work to next work if having strategies for each period. In basically, organizing skill is still have most important here.
Some people can say that planning skill is less important than studying knowledge. However, I think that this idea is just short sight of them. People cannot success with skill and experiment, especially knowing how to plan their life.
In conclusion, I want to repeat the necessary of the ability to plan and organize in life of each people, not just young people. After reading my opinion, I hope you will start to plan your life now.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...ey must choose what is your future job? what is your future family? And after having...
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Line 2, column 896, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[5]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...der to make this timetable, people must know plan and organize skill, that is very i...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be usually
... professor or politician. However, they usually be limited by the question:' how to g...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: ''.
...rticularly, you must study hard to have bachelor, after that is PHD degree. Besides that...
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Line 3, column 769, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...In basically, organizing skill is still have most important here. Some people can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, really, so, still, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, in particular, of course, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71106557377 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49323106069 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415983606557 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8373787676 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1612903226 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7419354839 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54838709677 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303719667038 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928866721719 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568653480382 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180172303307 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517854090274 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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