There is no shortage of debate about the importance of planning and organization of our day to day lives. In a current scenario, it is a very useful step to organize our lives so we can utilize each and every minute of the life. In my opinion, it is necessary to for the young people to organize their lives in a proper manner.
To begin with, life is a precious gift of nature and we should utilize each and every moment of life and if we respect life and then only life we respect us. There is big question arise how we can respect to the life?. There is a simple answer of it, we have to organize our life in such a manner that we can we can enjoy and be successful in life. If we have a well define future plans, we could be one of the successful in our lives. My own experience is a compelling example of this. In high school, I was very weak in my studies, during this period I never organize myself for the studies. I always had some random study regarding my subject. As a result of it, I score very low marks. After that, one of my teacher, identified my problem and he taught me how to plan for the studies and how to organize my schedule. In the last, I started working according to the suggestion of my teacher and presently I am successful and a very respected businessman in my city. This all happened because of proper planning and utilization of time. Therefore, I strongly believe that it is very important to plan and prepare ourself according to the situation.
Secondly, planning of life prevents us from unwanted stress, in this way, we can away from all worries and spend life in very peaceful style. In modern days, we are facing lots of problem day to day basis, and to face these problems, we should always prepare. For instance, One of my friend is diagnosed with cancer, and for the treatment, he needs a lot of money, but he is a very smart fellow. He already deposited very good amount of money in his emergency account. Here, he did a proper planning and organized himself in a manner, so he can avoid any kind of problem in future. Therefore, I believe in proper planning of life.
In conclusion, I strongly support the idea of the planning of life, and, will recommend to others to do the same. In this way, they can enjoy the life and will away from all the problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...he young people to organize their lives in a proper manner. To begin with, life is a precious ...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'we can'.
Suggestion: we can
...organize our life in such a manner that we can we can enjoy and be successful in life. If we ...
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Line 4, column 571, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...er, so he can avoid any kind of problem in future. Therefore, I believe in proper plannin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33025404157 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48605710342 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468822170901 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9384520201 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5217391304 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8260869565 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185075827679 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587331300555 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355501312273 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118417786952 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174518906401 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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