Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that having a good plan and program for daily works and also general aims led to we do our work in a special sequence and it is substantiated that we have more chance for success. Thus based on this fact it is very necessary for young people to have the ability to organizing. Contrary, to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that this kind of ideas and concepts that mentioned the necessity of planning for young people, not only has not helped but there is evidence that this is had the negative effect on health living of them. Because this pressure for doing works based on the specific plan can be led to increase the risk of depression and stress for young people. I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that ability to plan is essential for modern life.
First and foremost, if we like or do not like, there is this fact that our world is under variation, with a high rate. In this world very things are competitive, thus all of the people should be trying to use from all of their time with high efficiency. Received to this aim is not possible without just having one precise plan. Surely, through working randomly without the specific plan just led to wasting time and energy. All of the psychologists verified this fact and doing a lot of research for identifying best plans and best methods for a good and practical planning.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that Today, we need the ability of good planning and organization for a happy and healthy life. All of them have this experience that some days we were very busy and maybe we forgot to even eat lunch or some important works or even personal task. If this kind of happens repeated a lot we drop on the very serious problem. For example, illness, when we have not on time nutritional habit it can provide some digestion problem or another disease for ours. In addition, when we have not ant time for sport or spending time with our friends and family or having some fun time, certainly we are in the threaten of mental illness. Also, it can be effected on our family relationship.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that the ability of planning is very critical for young people. Because it is directly is related to their success in personal and social and a normal life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...world very things are competitive, thus all of the people should be trying to use from all...
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Line 2, column 425, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...an just led to wasting time and energy. All of the psychologists verified this fact and do...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... important works or even personal task. If this kind of happens repeated a lot we ...
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Line 3, column 671, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ving some fun time, certainly we are in the threaten of mental illness. Also, it can be effe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, thus, for example, in addition, kind of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55269320843 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43131040514 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480093676815 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7924693034 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7222222222 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255659946336 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097634681481 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726396380712 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175855549602 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628135655132 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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