These days, one of the matters that we are suffering from is the government's work, that because of lots of countries and my country is one of them, their government does not keep the attention to the citizens, and this discussion will have my opinion about where the government should spend the money.
First and foremost, there are lots of challenges which the government suffers from it, and one of them is how and where they spend the budget, is on the universities' s students or on the children, to complete their learning to build the country in future.
I think it is important to keep the attention on the universities students now and in this time.
In addition, the teenagers' students are the base to create the country with useful inventions, so, the government should spend more money on their universities to have a good education, because they are coming to the work, so, the successful function requires from them the good background on the education. And they should create for them the entertainment's centre to build a healthy body as they said " The healthy body in the healthy brain " because if their mind is in safe and healthy they will have the healthy body to study hard and then to create the great generation.
Last but not least, the students will manage the economy of the country in the future, so, they are the first right-holders now, and because of that the children will not want or understand this money they just want to play and have the fun, furthermore, the teenagers in future will be responsible for the kids, so they must build themselves and create a good future to be a good base for the coming generation.
At the end of that argument, I am convinced that the government should spend more money on the universities students to help them futurity to build the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ete their learning to build the country in future. I think it is important to keep the a...
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Line 10, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elp them futurity to build the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72585669782 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64062751908 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414330218069 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.7837700879 48.9658058833 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 216.714285714 100.406767564 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8571428571 20.6045352989 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15047755125 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840248737883 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478595811727 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882615206593 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416576774326 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 11.7677419355 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.002688172 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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