Today, we are surrounded by development's issue, we are watching that everything in our life has worked out, lifestyle; food; environment; and also the education, the schools around us are trying to become better to create a good new generation, one of their methods for that by creating the coed schools.
First of all, when boys and girls attend a school which has a different sex, that will make them ready to face life, because of the outside world, want from us that when we are becoming older, by the coed companies; universities; e.t.c.
And because of the separated schools, lots of students and I am one of them, become very shy to enter the coed university.
Secondly, the unseparated schools can make the student more creative, active and love to study, that because of the confrontation and challenging between of them, like the international schools which are known that they are coed school, and this kind of school and with their student's passion to study and win, they create for them the national and international competitions, which help the students to learn more and better.
Thirdly, the school that has the mix of sex can help its students to become more sociable people, that because of the communication between the boys and girls with different cultures, and they will found the common subjects; ideas, so they will always try to develop their life.
on the other hand, maybe the coed schools can have problems, for example, when the students love each other, that will become a violation of the school grammes.
In conclusion, even if the unseparated schools are better for us, but I believe that the separated schools are better if you want to study hard and to create the successful schools in the East of the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding schools'?
Suggestion: the surrounding schools
...d; environment; and also the education, the schools around us are trying to become better to create a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ll always try to develop their life. on the other hand, maybe the coed schools ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87666666667 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61444491665 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.1344086022 248% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.1496868568 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 243.833333333 100.406767564 243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.0 20.6045352989 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.1666666667 5.45110844103 407% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.063106981996 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367013057981 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291156424152 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0377845552061 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247994558241 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 11.7677419355 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.65 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 10.1575268817 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.0537634409 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.